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Kia ora I'm Sahil from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked your blog post you've done a great job my favourite bit was making the person on the sur board upside down. You brought me back when I went to the beach and there were big waves that I swam in and it got a little bit deep for me. Maybe next time you should make the writing a color because the white color of the is the same color as the writing. How does the Tsunami make fire? from Sahil :)
Hello Rylee. My name is Casey. I am shocked that you know so much about tsunamis! tsunamis are cool to watch but they are scary! What is your favorite natural disaster? -Casey
Kia ora, I'm Erika from Yaldhurst Model School. I like this because you put a person on a surfboard upside down on the waves. You reminded me of when I was in Hamner and I was in the hotel and we went in a tub thingy and we played in it, I also put my face in the water. Next time you could tell us why you put the hands there. Erika
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Kia ora I'm Sahil from Yaldhurst Model School. I liked your blog post you've done a great job my favourite bit was making the person on the sur board upside down. You brought me back when I went to the beach and there were big waves that I swam in and it got a little bit deep for me. Maybe next time you should make the writing a color because the white color of the is the same color as the writing. How does the Tsunami make fire? from Sahil :)
ReplyDeleteHello Rylee. My name is Casey.
ReplyDeleteI am shocked that you know so much about tsunamis!
tsunamis are cool to watch but they are scary!
What is your favorite natural disaster?
-Casey
Kia ora, I'm Erika from Yaldhurst Model School. I like this because you put a person on a surfboard upside down on the waves. You reminded me of when I was in Hamner and I was in the hotel and we went in a tub thingy and we played in it, I also put my face in the water. Next time you could tell us why you put the hands there.
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